#IMWAYR July 22, 2019

#IMWAYR time again, when readers share what they have been reading and find out what others have been up to in the past week. Kathryn hosts the adult version of this meme at Book Date. Jen at Teach Mentor Texts and Kellee and Ricki at Unleashing Readers host the kidlit rendition. Whatever you are looking forward to in your next great read, these are fabulous places to start your search.




We are taking a break from the city (and our grandchildren) by spending a few days in our house in Oliver, BC. We had a lovely family barbecue with relatives on Saturday.
I managed to get the binding finished on the quilt my sister and I created. It's going to be really, really hard to give it away! When I showed it off at the gathering, my cousin's five year old quipped, "Dad and I will take it off your hands." I'm going to have to make that kid a quilt.



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Poetry Friday July 19, 2019 Invincible


Chirri & Chirra series by Kaya Doi & Yuki Kaneko (Translator)


PICTURE BOOKS



4 stars
Chirri & Chirra series by Kaya Doi & Yuki Kaneko (Translator)

Chirri & Chirra are twins who have adventures while riding on their bicycles. In each book, Dring-dring, dring-dring! transitions the two girls into new experiences as they pedal their way into and through fantastical lands. Thank you Earl Dizon for introducing me to them.

Click on the above link if you want to find out more about them. Go ahead. I'll wait.


4.5 stars
Flashlight Night by Matt Forrest Esenwine & Fred Koehler (Illustrations)

This is one of those books that, once you get to the delightful ending, you have to go back and reread. I'm not always a fan of rhyming picture books, but loved the rhythm and rhyme in this one. Fred Koehler's art divinely complements the fantastical adventures a flashlight at night can take you to.


NOVELS



4.5 stars
Lost Girl by Anne Ursu

I’m not quite sure how to write about this book. It’s brilliant and multilayered. On the surface it’s about grade five twins who are in separate classrooms for the first time. They have to learn to navigate these small worlds on their own. It isn’t easy. One of them has to learn to vulnerable, the other to be assertive. They have to trust and believe in the other.

All this is played out against a backdrop of magic and an evil shop keeper. On the one hand, this story reminds us how important it is to learn to be independent. On the other is the acknowledgment that as true as that might be, we are stronger together. You don’t ever want to tangle with those Awesome Girls!
I would love to give this five stars, but I’m not sure how this will be received by students.
I had this on my #MustReadIn2020 list. Does this mean I am way ahead of my game?


4 stars
A Trick of the Light (Chief Inspector Armand Gamache #7) by Louise Penny & Ralph Cosham (Narrator)

In the middle of a murder mystery, Louise Penny reminds us of what it means to be human. The revealing of the culprit wasn’t nearly as surprising as the revelations about the different characters in the Sûreté and in Three Pines. I admit that I read these novels as much to see what they are up to as I do for the mysteries themselves. I can hardly wait to see what will happen next!

Louise Penny is one of Canada's finest mystery writers! 🍁


4 stars
Some Places More Than Others by Renée Watson

I've just finished this. I will be writing more about it, but what you need to know is that it was so good I got caught up in it and forgot to take notes for a review!



4 stars
Takedown by Laura Shovan

I was slow getting into this book as I wondered how it would compare to There's a Girl in my Hammerlock by Jerry Spinelli, a novel about a girl wrestler that I read ages and ages ago. It didn't take long and I was entirely engrossed by Mikayla and Lev. The story is told from both of their perspectives in alternating chapters.

Spinelli's book, about the only girl on a wrestling team was written in 1991. I wish this book showed that things have changed more. Alas, they have not.

I came to care a lot about both of these protagonists and was invested in how their relationship with each other and their families and friends evolved. I appreciate how the book takes a close look at competition and what gets left behind in the lives of elite athletes and lost in the joy of a sport as competitors move up into higher levels of play. I appreciate that our protagonists learned more about themselves in this book, but I'm equally happy that the secondary characters underwent transformations as well.


This book reminded me of my five year old boys playing soccer just for the crazy joy of being on a team and not really even understanding winning and losing. I think of them and other kids who ended up sitting on the bench because a coach doesn't think they are good enough to produce a win. I think with great fondness of the one coach who scrupulously played every kid on my son's hockey team, no matter that they lost every game. It was one of my son's best years of sport. 



4.5 stars
OCDaniel by Wesley King & Ramon De Ocampo (Narrator)

Daniel is a thirteen year old boy with OCD, but he doesn't know this is what it is. He's successful in many aspects of his school life but struggles with math because the numbers get in the way of thinking logically. He's highly capable as the backup kicker for his school's football team, but his anxiety interferes with consistency.

I liked the secondary characters a lot. His best friend, Max, might be a jock, but he's also a strong, good hearted young man. The two girls in his life, Raya and Sarah, are strong, positive individuals. It wasn't easy to connect to Sarah's belief that her mother and boyfriend murdered her father, but not completely unrealistic either given the circumstances.

Daniel's struggles, especially the sections when he is dealing with his evening routine are brutally intense. I had a hard time listening to it in spite of acknowledging that it must be worse to experience. In the afterward, King explains that much of this is autobiographical. It shows in the authenticity of the book.

Wesley King is a Canadian author from the other side of the country from me!  This is the first book of his I've read. There will be more. 🍁


5 stars
The Dragon with a Chocolate Heart (Tales from the Chocolate Heart #1 by Stephanie Burgis & Jill Frutkin (Narrator)

I adored this fantastic fantasy. Aventurine is a spunky dragon who is tired of being constrained inside her cave with her relatives. She sneaks out with the intention of showing her family that she is not as incompetent as they think. When she is tricked by a man she plans to eat, she ends up becoming human herself. Determined to make the most of her new life, she sets out to become an apprentice chocolatier.

Now that I’ve finished this review, I’m off to see if I can download the next in the series.
I have Ms Yingling to thank for introducing me to this one because any time she give 5 stars to a book, it becomes a must read for me!

POETRY



5+ stars
Salt by Nayyirah Waheed

Nayyirah Waheed has a gift for parsing out significant truths in a few words. Look at this poem here:


good + girl


-- rope


salt. overwhelms with this kind of stark profundity. If you have not yet read it, you should.


decolonization

requires
acknowledging
that your
needs and desires
should
never
come at the expense of another’s
life energy
it is being honest
that
you have been spoiled
by a machine
that
is not feeding you freedom
but
feeding
you
the milk of pain

— the release


My library copy had page after page of dog ears that I assume were marked because someone appreciated the poem on that page. It was a special treat for me to see if I too would be blown away by it. Mostly I was.


CURRENTLY


I'm reading Meet Yasmin! by by Saadia Faruqi and just started Mamaskatch: A Cree Coming of Age by Darrel J. McLeod. I'm presently listening to The Beautiful Mystery by Louise Penny. I'm savouring my way through poetry by Peter Trower.


UP NEXT


I sent Outside in: A Political Memoir by Libby Davies and With the Fire on High by Elizabeth Acevedo back to the library unread, but I did manage to get through some of the picture books in my pile. I am hoping to get to Love From A to Z by S. K. Ali and Pie in the Sky by Remy Lai. If the reading godess is on my side, I might even get to Girl of the Southern Sea by Michelle Kadarusman.


PROGRESS ON MY READING GOALS


#MustReadIn2018 15/25 1 in progress


#MustReadNFIn2018 9/12 1 in progress


25 Books by Canadian Indigenous Authors 16/25 1 in progress


25 books by Canadian Authors 35/25


Big Book Reading Challenge 4/4


Goodreads Reading Challenge 232/333

Chirri & Chirra series by Kaya Doi & Yuki Kaneko (Translator)

Thanks to Earl Dizon at The Chronicles Of A Children's Book Writer for introducing me to this series!

Chirri & Chirra are twins who have adventures while riding on their bicycles. Dring-dring, dring-dring! transitions the two girls into new experiences in all the books as they pedal their way into and through fantastical lands. Although I have listed these in the order of their publication, they do not need to be read in order. Clicking on the title links will take you to the Goodreads page for the books. 


In the first one, Chirri & Chirra, they head off into the forest where they discover a cafe that has different sized tables to accommodate different sized creatures. I now want to try some acorn coffee! They continue pedalling through the forest to a bakery where they purchase treats to eat while enjoying a picnic under a tree.


In the second book, Chirri & Chirra: In the Tall Grass, the twins end up travelling through tall grass near their home. They become small to enter the worlds of bees, flower chafers, lizards and fireflies.


In Chirri & Chirra, The Snowy Day, The girls end up riding their bikes in the snow. Eventually they a door of ice that takes them into a world of animals where they find "hot fruit punch with apples and cinnamon." In the great hall they end up playing marbles made from "frozen buds of many kinds of flowers". You will have to read the book yourself to find out what happens to those marvellous marbles.

Each of these books highlights delightful treats. I am lusting after "honey sponge cake balls wrapped in flower petals." As soon as I am back in Vancouver, BC, I'm searching for a Japanese bakery or restaurant where I can find these!

Kaya Doi's colour pencil drawings create a whimsical world to get lost in. I found myself pouring over the pages and savouring the details. Her interest in environmental and animal welfare issues manifests itself in each of these books in different ways. What is prominent is an inclusive democracy of all living things. Her books celebrate connection and a coming together of all of us, where every being gets what is 'just right for them."

When I read the first one, I wasn't really sure how well these books would be received by children. To be honest, I'm still wondering about their responses to these. They they are charming and impart a significant message for all of us about living in optimum relationship with our world, but they aren't flashy or witty. I read through review after review on Goodreads in search of feedback and found a few that claim their children enjoyed them. My two grandchildren are not ready for them, but I will definitely introduce them to these girls when they are older.

I am looking forward to reading Chirri & Chirra, Underground and Chirri & Chirra, on the Town!



Poetry Friday, July 19, 2019

This week's Poetry Friday roundup is hosted by Carol at Carol's Corner. Go over and admire the yellow lab service puppy she is training. Her poem, I Will Love You Well, will break your heart a bit. Make sure to check out the links to other participants sharing poetry today.


I finished reading salt. by nayyirah waheed. I wish, almost more than anything, that I could write like this.
She has a gift for parsing out significant truths in so few words. Look at this poem here:

good + girl

-- rope

salt. overwhelms with this kind of stark profundity. If you have not yet read it, you should.

My library copy had page after page of dog ears that I assume were marked because someone appreciated the poem on that page. It was a special treat for me to see if I too would be blown away by it. Mostly I was.

Meanwhile, I am still slogging away on my memoir project from 1958, when my family joined other relatives on an adventure into the Pine Valley region in Northern British Columbia. I'm committed to sharing a bit every week to keep me going. I just hope to get some kind of drafts out there. I appreciate feedback on the construction of the poetry and ideas and questions about what information might be missing.



In many ways, life in the bush was hard, but it wasn't all there was. Laughter, love, and playful teasing were ubiquitous. Life was full of fun, and for us kids, a freedom most children today can't imagine! 

invincible

reclaimed by the forest
we youngsters ran wild,
transformed into
untamed creatures

barefoot mobs
careened between trees,
terrorizing our domain,

upended rocks
revealed concealed critters,
minuscule and
marvellous

played
tag and hide and seek
tossed rocks into the river
competing
to reach the farthest
make the biggest splash

admiring the older ones who
searching for the perfect flat stone
skipped as many times as possible
across the water

carousing from cabin to cabin
younger ones trailed after
older ones
jumped on beds
built forts out of bedding
disturbed babies
till one adult after another
lost patience
and chased us along

a whisper of umber cloud,
the distant rumble
of loaded logging truck

sent us into a tizzy

here and there
from all directions
we came running

chasing after it, we
disappeared into dust blooms
rolled in the powdered earth
exploded into laughter
gazing at one another’s
dirt brown faces

my only responsibility was
keeping my two younger sisters,
rae and zoe, safe

maybe danger
lurked,
stalking us
from dark shadows

i knew only comfort and mirth
in that green world
redolent
of wood smoke,
fresh pine
and rich earth

Here are links to previous Pine Valley poems. 
Leaving
Characters

Journey

Arrival

Preparedness 

Ready and Willing 

Larder

Laundry

Diaper Duty

Skunk Trouble

Working

Pawns

Crossing
Bath Time

#IMWAYR July 15, 2019

#IMWAYR time again, when readers share what they have been reading and find out what others have been up to in the past week. Kathryn hosts the adult version of this meme at Book Date. Jen at Teach Mentor Texts and Kellee and Ricki at Unleashing Readers host the kidlit rendition. Whatever you are looking forward to in your next great read, these are fabulous places to start your search.


The weather improved last week so I managed to get out into the garden. It looks pretty good if you don't examine it too closely. Gardening might be a lot of work, but we love going out into our backyard and picking our dinner.


The true miracle of the week was getting my sewing room tidy. I needed to get it under control so I could finish a quilt. I got the pieced binding machine stitched so all I have left to do is the hand sewing. It's going to be hard to give this one away. I'll post a picture next week if I get it finished.


Clicking on the title to the following books will take you to the Goodreads page for that book.


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Poetry Friday July 12, 2019 Bath Night


PICTURE BOOKS



5 stars
Peek-a-Boo Zoo! by Jane Cabrera

I picked this up at a library story time and checked it out because my grandson sat down to read it with me without any persuasion. It's a simple repetitive rhyme scheme that doesn't really work for me, but sure pleases my grandkids. Truthfully, it's all about those eyes and turning the page to see who's there. We've been reading it pretty regular these days. Ada screams with delight each time she sees the next set of eyes.


NOVELS



5 + stars
The Remarkable Journey of Coyote Sunrise by Dan Gemeinhart & Khristine Hvam (Narrator)

I love love love this book. Coyote and her dad, Rodeo, are two characters I will be carrying with me for a long time. As they travel around the country in their renovated bus, the pick up a diverse collection of brilliant secondary characters. Their destinations might be different, but here they are united in love and friendship. This novel is a powerful look at loss and healing and that bus is a powerful analogy for the earth. My eyes leaked a lot. There might even have been some ugly crying.



4 stars
Orange for the Sunsets by Tina Athaide

I've been wanting to read this book for a while because I have a friend who's family had to leave Uganda when Idi Amin came to power. We are lucky to have him and his family here in Canada. Also, Ms Yingling gave it 5 stars on Goodreads. 

Previously, Asha and her best friend, Yesofu, didn't acknowledge the differences between them. Then a decree was proclaimed that all Indians must leave the country in 90 days. As the days to expulsion count down, violence against Indians increases. People who were once friends turn against them. Asha doesn't want to have to leave and does something that ends up costing her more than she could imagine.
Tina Athaide has done a brilliant job highlighting the disparity between the two main protagonists. Asha, a young Indian girl, has no idea how privileged she is compared to Yesofu and his African family. I also appreciate how she showed us readers the complexity of the situation.
Tina Athaide makes her home in Canada. 


4 stars
Other Words for Home by Jasmine Warga & Vaneh Assadourian (Narrator)

When Syria become too dangerous for Jude and her pregnant mother, they travel to America to be with her mom's brother and family. There is authentic tension between Jude and her cousin for all kinds of reasons. I loved all the complex characters in the extended family.

This is an important book to help Canadian and American children come to a deeper understanding of what it means to be a refugee.
I listened to this instead of reading it with my eyes. I think I will have to find a hard copy to read as mentor text for the verse project I am working on.


5 stars
The Serpent King by Jeff Zentner

This is the kind of YA coming of age novel I adore. It’s got rich characters dealing with important stuff. The relationship between the three protagonists is authentic. I was invested in each of them and couldn’t stop reading. I wept buckets.

There is so much going on. I appreciated how Zentner unpacks religious fundamentalism to show us the pitfalls, at the same time as he highlights a more loving and accepting version of Christianity.
That said, I don’t care how good the book is, I am too old to stay awake reading till 4:30 in the morning.

CURRENTLY


I've started Lost Girl by Anne Ursu and am listening to A Trick of the Light (Chief Inspector Armand Gamache #7) by Louise Penny. I haven't made much progress on Some Places More Than Others by Renée Watson because I don't like reading on my iPad. However, I will try to get it finished this week!


UP NEXT


I've got a lot of books to get through before they go back to the library so I will have to hunker down and carve out some reading time. Here's what I need to plow through in the next four days: Outside in: A Political Memoir by Libby Davies; Takedown by Laura Shovan; and With the Fire on High by Elizabeth Acevedo. There is also a pile of picture books. 


PROGRESS ON MY READING GOALS


#MustReadIn2018 15/25 1 in progress


#MustReadNFIn2018 9/12


25 Books by Canadian Indigenous Authors 16/25


25 books by Canadian Authors 33/25


Big Book Reading Challenge 4/4


Goodreads Reading Challenge 221/333

Poetry Friday, July 12. 2019

This week's Poetry Friday roundup is hosted by poet, Jone Rush MacCulloch at Deowriter. Go and have a look at the fabulous poetry fortune generator she received and make sure to check out the links to other participants sharing poetry today.



I am still working on poems from 1958, when my family joined other relatives on an adventure into the Pine Valley region in Northern British Columbia. I'm committed to sharing a bit every week to keep me going. They might not be in any kind of order. I just hope to get some kind of drafts out there. I appreciate feedback on the construction of the poetry and ideas and questions about what information might be missing.

I've got four or five more sections left I think. Then I expect I'll go back and rewrite all of it.

BATH TIME

In summer
formal baths
were unheard of.
Getting cleaned up was
as simple as
sudsing and
splashing in the river.

A basin of soapy water
was always on hand
for quick cleanups,
washing hands before meals,
and removing the worst of the dirt
before bed.

With the onset of fall,
the weather turned cold,
the river colder.

We got bathed
formally,
'bout once a week.

Water was hauled up,
heated on the stove
and poured into
a galvanized square washtub.

Everyone in the family
bathed in the same water.
The baby went first,
then us kids got our turn.

One evening
I was lucky enough to
be second in line.

Mommy washed my hair
and made sure
the rest of me was
scrubbed up good
before wrapping me in a towel
to dry off.

Even with the wood stove blazing,
It was still frigid in the kitchen.

The towel covered my
shoulders and torso,
but that’s all.

Hugging it around me,
I backed up towards
the heat,
wanting to
warm my backside.

Be careful,
My mother warned.

Ignoring her,
I edged my rear
nearer to the warmth,
until
I backed my bottom
right up against
fiery hot cast iron.

hssss

Seared the skin right off.

Hurt like the devil.

But I don’t actually
remember that part,
only mortification.

I suppose I am left with a scar,
but luckily,
it's all behind me.

#IMWAYR JULY 8, 2019

#IMWAYR time again, when readers share what they have been reading and find out what others have been up to in the past week. Kathryn hosts the adult version of this meme at Book Date. Jen at Teach Mentor Texts and Kellee and Ricki at Unleashing Readers host the kidlit rendition. Whatever you are looking forward to in your next great read, these are fabulous places to start your search.


The weather last week in my part of the world has been overcast, wet, and cool. My garden is out of control, but I am a fair-weather gardener, so I'm leaving it alone til I get better working conditions. Besides, the raspberries and strawberries are kind of tasteless without sun. 
On the positive side, I've had lots of time for reading and writing. I should try to get the chaos that is my sewing room under control. I keep going in and looking at the disaster, then shutting the door and ignoring it. Maybe I will get to it this week. 
I'm writing this early Sunday morning because the family is coming over for supper tonight and I expect I will be too exhausted by the time they leave to start then. I doubt I will have finished anything, but hope to squeeze some reading time in of some kind or another. 

Clinking on the title to the following books will take you to the Goodreads page for that book.

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PICTURE BOOKS


5 stars
Charlie & Mouse Even Better by Laurel Snyder & Emily Hughes (Illustrator)

I love love love this series.
I love this family. I love the humour. I adore Emily Hughes illustrations.
Pancakes, birthday shopping and a special cake for mom fill these three stories.
Unfortunately my grandkids won't sit still for this much text on a page, but I did catch Ada browsing through the book on her own.


5 stars
Wish by Matthew Cordell

Just wow!
I did not have to wait for children, but my son and daughter in law did. This book could have been written for them. I'm sure many other parents will think it is for them.
What I can tell you is that our granddaughter, Ada, was worth waiting for.

NOVELS


3 stars
Archenemies (Renegades #2) by Marissa Meyer, Dan Bittner (Narrator) & Rebecca Soler (Narrator)

I liked the beginning of this book well enough. Then it went on and on with all kinds of teenage romantic angst. I really liked the first book in the series, so saying this saddens me. I increased the speed of the audiobook just to get it finished. I won’t be reading the next in the trilogy unless hell freezes over.
Of course, I’m too old to be the target audience anyway so you should probably ignore this review.


5 stars
The Benefits of Being An Octopus by Ann Braden

This book made me anxious while reading it. That's a testimony to how well it is written.
Zoey, her mother, and three younger siblings, live with her mom's boyfriend, Larry. There are many good things about living there, but her mother has changed from the courageous, confident woman she once was.
While life at home is hard, and Zoey has a lot of responsibility for her younger siblings, she is lucky to be seen by one of her teachers, Ms Rochambea. Ms Rochambeau makes sure Zoey becomes a member of debate club, and does her best to help Zoey become more sure of herself.

This book takes a close look at what it means to live in poverty. By the end, readers will be rooting for Zoey to find a way to lift herself above her beginnings.


4 stars
DreadfulWater Shows Up by Thomas King (writing as Hartley GoodWeather)

I am enjoying this mystery series featuring Cheroke Indian, Thumps Dreadfulwater, an  ex cop turned art photographer. It's hilarious that he continues to be a sleuth whether he wants to be or not. I read Cold Skies (the third one) first. I loved the characters then, and found it fascinating meeting them as they were presented in the first novel.
I loved the humour, the suspense, and the convoluted plot. I've already put a hold on the second book.



5 stars
A Good Kind of Trouble by Lisa Moore Ramée,

The United Nations consists of Shay, Julia, and Isabella. All three girls come from separate ethnic backgrounds but have been best friends since they were in grade three. Their first year at middle school brings all kinds of obstacles and opportunities. Surviving with their friendship still intact might be their biggest challenge.
Shayla is one of those memorable characters you meet in middle grade fiction. She's an authentic kid with a big heart caught up in normal kinds of friendship issues against the backdrop of another shooting of a black man by police.

NONFICTION


5 stars
The Hunting Accident: A True Story of Crime by David L. Carlson & Landis Blair (Illustrations)

There are a lot of pages in this graphic novel but I anticipated it would be a relatively easy read. I was wrong. It is so intense that I could only read chunks of it at a time. It's the story of Matt Rizzo, a young blind man who in the 1930s ends up in prison. As much as he wanted to die, he connected with another nefarious prisoner who helped him find redemption through reading Dante's Inferno and writing poetry.
After he was paroled, he kept his past a secret, married and had a child. The marriage fell apart when his secret was revealed. It's only when his son, Charlie, begins to follow the gangster path, that he tells the truth about his history.
David L. Carlson has included Matt Rizzo's own words in this biography. Landis Blair's darkly detailed, gritty art integrates the text in such a way that you have to spend time absorbing them. It's the combination that makes the book so profound.

CURRENTLY

I am listening to The Remarkable Journey of Coyote Sunrise by Dan Gemeinhart. I'm reading The Serpent King by Jeff Zentnerin in book format and as an ebook from Netgalley, Some Places More Than Others by Renée Watson. I'm forcing myself to savour, and not speed through Salt by Nayyirah Waheed. Her poetry is just stunning.

UP NEXT

I'm hoping to get to Lost Girl by Anne Ursu, Orange for the Sunsets by Tina Athaide and  listening to Other Words for Home by Jasmine Warga as my next audiobook.

PROGRESS ON MY READING GOALS

#MustReadIn2018 13/25 2 in progress

#MustReadNFIn2018 9/12

25 Books by Canadian Indigenous Authors 16/25

25 books by Canadian Authors 32/25

Big Book Reading Challenge 4/4

Goodreads Reading Challenge 216/333

Poetry Friday July 5, 2019

This week's Poetry Friday roundup is hosted by educator and poet, Tricia Stohr-Hunt at The Miss Rumphius Effect. Go and read her triolet and make sure to check out the links to other participants sharing poetry today.

I am continuing to work on poems from 1958, when my family joined other relatives on an adventure into the Pine Valley region in Northern British Columbia. I'm committed to sharing a bit every week to keep me going. They might not be in any kind of order. I just hope to get some kind of drafts out there. I appreciate feedback on the construction of the poetry and ideas and questions about what information might be missing.

Today's poem combines a memory of mine about crossing the swollen Pine River with a memory from my Uncle Bill.

CROSSING

Gorged on autumn rain,
the Pine River
churned and roiled
ravenous waves licking
at the bridge deck,
readying to devour it whole.

Timothy was sick,
getting worse,
might not make it,
had to 
see a doctor,
had to
chance the river,
cross the bridge,
make a trip
to Prince George.

Mommy got us
kids ready to go.

Waiting
in the car,
I watched
adults determine
the least dangerous
way to cross.

Searching
their anxious faces
for sign of
comfort,
assurance,

found none.

Heard only
the snarling roar
of the hungry torrent.

Finally,
a decision was made.

Out of the car we tumbled.

Mommy held
the bundled up baby
in one arm and
the hand of James
in the other.

Squeezing hard onto
the hands of
my two younger sisters,
one on either side of me,
we traversed the trembling span,
terrified it would rip apart
beneath us.

On the other side,
fear abated as
we turned to watch
the station wagon,
driven by my uncle,
ease it’s way
across the bridge.



Links to previous poems are here:

Leaving

Characters

Journey

Arrival

Preparedness 

Ready and Willing 

Larder

Laundry

Diaper Duty

Skunk Trouble

Working

Pawns