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For over thirty years I have met with a group of women friends on the long weekend in May. For the last couple of decades we have been meeting at a three bedroom cabin overlooking the ocean. On Saturday we went meandering along a path circumnavigating a small peninsula that divides the ocean from a secluded bay. At the very tip we discovered sedum blooming. I fell in love. Later I returned by myself with my camera and these darlings wouldn't let go of me. I sat there perched on lichen painted rock, admiring them while this poem wrote itself.
Ode to a Yellow Succulent
Look at you,
glorious, brave and hardy,
daring to thrive at the edge of no man's land
Look at you,
staking your claim in time and space
here at the perimeter of sphagnum moss
where
gatekeepers of the land,
black basalt sentinels,
rounded and potted from conflict with ancient seas,
mark time in millennium
Look at you,
standing stalwart at rigid attention
serene in the face of gale and salt spray
radiant in hues of green, pink, blue, and red
flaunting your yellow crown
black basalt sentinels,
rounded and potted from conflict with ancient seas,
mark time in millennium
Look at you,
standing stalwart at rigid attention
serene in the face of gale and salt spray
radiant in hues of green, pink, blue, and red
flaunting your yellow crown
proudly proclaiming,
I am here,
Look at me!
Look at me!
How lovely... I love how you pay attention to the world. Those succulents are amazing, but you brought them to life even more!
ReplyDeleteThank you. I have seen them every year, but this time they seemed to shout out at me!
DeleteYellow succulents have earned my respect...thanks to your lovely poem!
ReplyDeleteI'm so glad - they are just amazing little plants.
DeleteSo nice to read and see you passion for the flowers we can only enjoy in these moments. Your poem captures your passion forever.
ReplyDeleteThanks - I also brought one home with me to remind me of how precious all kinds of life are.
DeleteI just love the structure of this poem- and how you begin and end it. What a gorgeous sedum you spotted.
ReplyDeleteThanks Lisa - there were so many of them growing and glowing along the last outposts of earth.
DeleteI love succulent blooms, dainty and hardy! Beautiful voice in this, Cheriee! Love "staking your claim in time and space".
ReplyDeleteThanks so much Linda - I felt so much the contrast between the timelessness of the rocks and ocean and the way this plant asserted itself into it all.
DeleteI had no idea that sedum could look so spectacularly. Your ode to its hardiness is lovely.
ReplyDeleteThanks Bernadette. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
DeleteMe again. This would be a very nice post for the Salon that I run on Wednesdays. Do consider joining us.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the invitation. You will have to send me a link.
DeleteCheerie...isn't that sedum an interesting plant? I can't seems to kill it, even though I accidentally pull it out of the ground. Shallow roots, and it just keeps on growing. Love your piece, as usual! maribethbatcho
ReplyDeleteI think they are indomitable!
DeleteGorgeous poem! I love these sedums too. Have a few in one area of my garden
ReplyDeleteThanks Carrie, I brought one home with me. I will plant it here and hope to bring some of it to my place in the Okanagan.
DeleteWonderful noticing, Cheriee. As I read your poem, I kept imagining the plant's voice shouting, "Look at me," and then the last stanza delivered :)
ReplyDeleteThanks so much Brian - That is pretty much how it happened.
DeleteI love the way that your friendships with your group of friends seem to mirror the indomitable plants - firmly rooted for over thirty years, and still a thing of beauty!
ReplyDeleteYes! It's all about trust - after this length of time we trust each other completely.
DeleteLovely! Thanks for linking me!
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