Much thanks to all the participants in SOL who inspire and encourage my own
writing. Special appreciation to Two Writing teachers who host this weekly
event.
The best thing about being a teacher, is how much we learn from our students. This past year I've been working with six and seven year old student writers. Last week I managed to get their published stories posted. (It's a long story about how I couldn't upload their books to our school website, but that is another tale for another time) You can access the page with all their stories here. It has an introduction that tells a bit about how their books came together.
At the end of the week they read these stories to the rest of
their classes.
Their books are filled with beautiful phrases and lines. They
created interesting compelling characters. There is humour, horror,
adventure, compassion and the integration of classroom learning. Some are
simple stories well told. Others have complicated plot twists and turns.
Friendship, in its many iterations, is a repeated theme.
When we started, many of these darlings struggled just to get
words onto paper. Reading them afterwards was nearly impossible. Watching them
read their stories out loud to their peers now is a confirmation of how
important our work is. They have all come a very long way.
Here are a few excerpts. Clicking on the link will take you to the
book saved as a google doc.
And Abigail was the youngest. She was 17 but still liked
superheroes.
Michael went to a peaceful lake. He got on his hands and knees and
drank some water. Then the last small mind control feeling just exhaled out of
his heart.
But then his dream ended because he woke up, Harry was desperate
to follow his dream. His parents had told him to always follow his dreams so
Harry wanted to go back to sleep and finish his dream.
They had lots of fun hopping around on the moon because there
wasn't much gravity. They collected all kinds of moon rocks.
Suddenly Amberley saw something in the distance. It was a troupe
of monkeys. No longer was she in the rain forest. She was on an island. Right
there in front of her with the other monkeys, was the monkey king.
Bob and Rex became best friends. Sometime they get mad and have
fights. Sometimes they cry. But they always say sorry, and they are always best
friends.
One day she unrolled her blinds and a huge boom of light came in.
The witch was amazed so she went outside and found a little girl was running
by. She said, "Hi, come into my house"
When Bertha got back home she went right to her room in a flash.
She took off her bathrobe, put the squirrel on the table and got back to work.
She got a sharp knife from the kitchen and cut the squirrel in half. Then the
blood started pouring off onto the carpet. It stained so bright that it looked
like raspberries. It made her feel weird and queasy.
Once upon a time there there lived a dragon. He wanted to break
the castle. He whacked the castle with his tail and cracked the tower and it
fell down. He took a deep breath and whooshed fire out of his mouth. The Castle
burned down. Most of the people escaped and ran to the village.
Some time in the next two weeks I will get together with the
authors to celebrate their work with cake. I am so very proud of all of
them.
That's a great accomplishment for you and your student writers!
ReplyDeleteYou might enjoy linking your celebration at RuthAyresWrites, where bloggers link and celebrate on Friday night/Saturday.
I'll think of it, but right now I'm almost overwhelmed with blogging twice a week!
DeleteI am really impressed with what the students accomplished. I enjoyed reading some of the sorties and will go back at another time to finish them.
ReplyDeleteThanks Robert. I am very impressed by what they accomplished and how much I learned about writing from them!
DeleteSeveral wonderful turns of phrase from these writers. As you say, Cheriee, they and you have come far. Congratulations on those gains; best going forward!
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